Mood, Tune and the Misleading Recording in a Hlabu Question
You are preparing the Hlabu (Poetry) section of the same half-yearly paper - 20 marks, two 5-mark questions and five 2-mark questions. The prescribed poem is a lament: a mother whose son has gone to work in a distant town repeats a refrain asking him to come back, and the poem opens with a bird calling at dawn. The school owns a recording of the poem sung to a bright, fast tune, and you played it once in class in September.
In trial marking, two answers to the 5-mark question 'What is the mood of the poem? Support your answer' sit side by side. Student A writes that the poem is joyful because the tune is happy and the bird sings at dawn, and quotes the refrain. Student B writes that the refrain is a plea, that the dawn bird marks the hour of waiting rather than a celebration, and quotes the same refrain. A third question on the paper asks candidates to 'describe the rhyme scheme', a phrasing lifted from an old English paper.
1. Decide the marks for A and B and justify them with a scheme.
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A gets 1, B gets 5. Mood is not the same thing as tune. The question asks what the poem feels, and the only admissible evidence is the words: the refrain asking the son to return, the mother's address to him, and the dawn bird, which the poem's own imagery places at the hour of waiting. A has answered from the performance, not the text; the recording is your teaching aid, not the poem. B makes a claim, anchors it in the refrain, and reads the bird as contrast - the reading the textbook introduction supports. Give A 1 for noticing that a contrast exists at all, and say in class that the tune you played is one singer's setting: any question about mood must be settled by quotation, not by melody.
2. Rewrite the 'describe the rhyme scheme' question so that it tests something real.
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The phrase imports a term from English prosody that does not describe what this hlabu is doing. The poem is built of paired lines with a refrain returning at fixed points; its discipline is syllable count and balance between the two halves of a pair, not end rhyme. Replace the item with: 'Quote the refrain. How many times does it return, and what changes in the lines immediately before each return?' A model answer: the refrain returns four times with unchanged wording, while the line before it moves from the son's departure to the mother's old age - so the repeated line measures time rather than restating an idea. That question is answerable from the printed text alone, tests structure, and cannot be satisfied by labelling a pattern.
3. Should the recording be dropped from your teaching, given what it caused?
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No - drop the framing, not the recording. Sung hlabu is meant to be heard, and hearing a setting fixes syllable count and refrain placement better than any explanation. What went wrong is that the strongest cue in the room - a fast, bright tune - was left unexamined against the weakest habit in the room, reading for atmosphere. Before playing it, say what it is: one singer's setting, and the words are the examinable thing. After playing it, ask what the singer does to the last refrain, and whether the words there sound like welcome. That converts a hazard into a lesson on the difference between a performance and a text, which is exactly what the poetry section tests.