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Hiroshima Entrance English: English Composition and Guided Writing: Clear Answer, Visible Structure

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English Composition and Guided Writing: Clear Answer, Visible Structure

English composition is the guided-writing task: you are given a short prompt, sometimes with notes or a situation, and asked to write a connected text of a set length. Markers reward a clear answer to the question, visible organization, and controlled grammar more than ambitious vocabulary used wrongly.

Build the answer in three moves

  1. Answer first: your first sentence states your opinion or the point of the paragraph. Do not build up to it, as Japanese essay style often does.
  2. Support with two reasons, each followed by a consequence or a short example. One reason developed well beats three reasons listed.
  3. Close by restating the position in different words. Do not introduce a new idea in the last sentence.

Language control

  • Keep sentences short enough to check: subject, verb, object.
  • Use connectives you can handle - because, so, for example, however, as a result - and use each once.
  • Check articles and plurals, which Japanese writers most often drop.

Worked example

Prompt: “Do you think children should start learning a second language in elementary school? Write 40–60 words.” Model: “I think elementary school is a good time to start a second language. Young children are not afraid of making mistakes, so they speak more freely. They also imitate sounds more easily than adults. For these reasons, an early start gives students a strong base.” Reasoning: the opinion is in sentence one, two reasons follow with a result, and the last sentence closes without new content. It is 55 words, inside the limit.

Traps

  • Off-topic answers that reuse a memorized paragraph.
  • Repeating “I think” in every sentence.
  • Going far over or under the word limit; both lose marks.