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Patchwriting in a Senior Argumentative Research Unit

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Patchwriting in a Senior Argumentative Research Unit

In a 12th grade composition class of 28 students, the argumentative research paper is due in two weeks. A draft review shows that 9 students have a clear arguable thesis, 14 have a thesis that is a fact or a question, and 5 have no thesis. Source use is weaker: 11 students drop quotations without framing or commentary, 7 patchwrite by substituting a few words, and 4 copied passages without citation. The school policy treats plagiarism as a referral and a zero on the draft. The teacher suspects that most patchwriting reflects undeveloped paraphrase skills, especially among six multilingual learners and four students with IEPs in written expression; one student has a 504 plan for extended time. The department requires an 8–10 page paper with MLA citation. Four 50-minute periods remain before the final draft. The teacher wants to uphold academic integrity but not punish skill gaps as cheating.

1. How would you analyze the four copied passages and seven patchwritten passages to decide which cases require formal referral and which require instruction? What evidence would you document?

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I would distinguish intent and scale from skill error, while still applying the policy. For each case, I would document: the source, the amount copied, whether quotation marks or citation were attempted, the assignment’s instruction, and any prior feedback. Four passages copied without citation cannot be ignored; I would follow the school’s referral process, but I would also confer with the student to determine whether they understood citation. For the seven patchwritten passages, I would look for a pattern: substituting synonyms while keeping sentence structure, or copying a source’s idea without attribution. Patchwriting often signals that students do not know how to paraphrase and cite simultaneously. I would not announce “plagiarism” to the class or treat the seven as cheating before examining drafts and prior instruction. I would document the evidence, notify the appropriate administrator according to policy, and separate the integrity consequence from the instructional response. If the policy allows, I would require a revision with a citation check and a reflective memo. The key is consistent evidence: source, overlap, student explanation, and prior teaching.

2. Design four class periods of instruction and checkpoints that address thesis, source integration, and citation without abandoning the paper deadline.

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Period 1 - Thesis clinic. Students bring their current thesis. Mini-lesson on arguable claim vs fact/question; students test three sample theses against criteria. Checkpoint: one revised thesis + because-clause. I review before the next class. Period 2 - Source sandwich. Model quote, paraphrase, and summary with one short source. Students practice the moves “introduce-quote-explain-connect” using their own source. Checkpoint: one source sandwich paragraph. Multilingual learners get a frame; IEP students get a chunked checklist. Period 3 - Paraphrase and citation lab. Use a short passage and have students write a paraphrase, then compare it to the original to remove borrowed phrasing. Mini-lesson on MLA in-text citation and works cited. Checkpoint: a paraphrase plus correct citation. Period 4 - Draft revision and peer review. Students use a rubric focused on thesis, evidence, commentary, and citation. Teacher confers with the four copied-passage students and the seven patchwriters separately, not as a public group. This sequence fits the deadline because it uses the existing draft as the material; it does not add a new paper.

3. How would you grade the final papers so that students with IEPs/504 plans and multilingual learners are held to the argument standard while receiving appropriate access? Explain what should and should not be modified.

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Hold constant: the demand for an arguable thesis, relevant evidence, commentary that connects evidence to claim, and ethical source use. Modify access: extended time, chunked checkpoints, oral rehearsal of ideas, sentence frames, a graphic organizer, and separate editing time. For multilingual learners, I would allow planned language supports but not replace the analytical paragraph with a summary. For students with written-expression IEPs, I would grade the same rubric but apply only the accommodations in the plan; if the IEP permits oral response or scribing, I would use it and assess the argument, not handwriting. I would separate content/argument from conventions in the rubric so that sentence-level errors do not mask strong reasoning, but I would still teach and give feedback on citation accuracy. I would not lower the page requirement for students with IEPs unless the plan says so; instead, I would chunk the requirement. I would also avoid “alternative” assignments that become easier. Fairness is consistent standards with variable routes to demonstrate them.