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SQU English Exit: Writing

SQU English Exit · Work through your exam, one topic at a time.

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Writing

Writing tests whether you can produce clear, coherent academic English under exam conditions. Tasks may require a paragraph, a short essay, or editing sentences for unity and correctness. Markers reward a clear central idea, logical order, specific support, and control of sentence structure.

Core rules

  • State one controlling idea in the topic sentence; every following sentence must support it.
  • Use transitions that show the actual relationship: addition (moreover), contrast (however), cause (therefore), example (for instance).
  • Keep pronoun reference unambiguous: a reader should know exactly what 'this' or 'they' points to.
  • Combine short sentences only when the relationship is clear; otherwise keep them separate.
  • Match register: avoid contractions and slang in formal academic writing.
  • End with a sentence that closes the idea rather than introducing a new topic.

Worked example

Original: 'The campus is large. Many students take buses. The buses are often late. Students arrive stressed.' Revision: 'Because the campus is large, many students take buses; however, late buses often leave them arriving stressed.' Reasoning: The revision shows cause (large campus leads to bus use), contrast (however), and result (late buses lead to stress). It removes choppy repetition and keeps one controlling idea.

Traps

  • Transition overload: linking words cannot repair unrelated ideas.
  • Pronoun ambiguity: 'The manager told the assistant that she was late' leaves 'she' unclear.
  • Sentence fragments presented as full sentences.
  • Unsupported generalizations such as 'Everyone knows' without evidence.
  • Shifting tense or point of view within one paragraph.