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Literalism versus Idiom in an Anuvāda Answer

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Literalism versus Idiom in an Anuvāda Answer

The translation section carries 10 marks. The Sanskrit passage has four sentences; the second contains the absolutive 'gatvā' and a long bahuvrīhi describing the minister. Students may answer in Telugu or English. Of 52 scripts, 21 translate word-for-word and produce target-language sentences that are grammatically possible but unidiomatic; 11 paraphrase freely and omit the minister's description; 7 leave 'gatvā' untranslated; and 13 are largely accurate. Script F, in Telugu, writes two finite clauses: 'rājā sabhaku veḷḷāḍu, mantrini aḍigāḍu'. Script G, in English, writes: 'The king went to the assembly and asked the minister', omitting the bahuvrīhi. The rubric allots 4 for sense, 3 for grammatical connection, especially the ktvā link, 2 for target-language idiom, and 1 for accuracy of names and terms. The teacher must decide whether finite-verb renderings lose marks, how to treat Script G's omission, and how to give feedback that respects both media.

1. Apply the rubric to Scripts F and G, stating the exact evidence you would cite for each row.

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Script F (Telugu)
  • Sense 4/4: both actions are present and correctly related: the king went, then asked the minister.
  • Connection 2/3: the sequence is clear, but the ktvā construction is rendered as two finite clauses. Telugu can use a participial link, so the compact relation is available; award 2 rather than 3.
  • Idiom 2/2: the Telugu is natural, even if it splits the clause.
  • Accuracy 1/1: the participants are correctly identified. Total 9/10. Do not call the answer wrong; it is accurate but less tightly linked than the original.
Script G (English)
  • Sense 3/4: the main action is right, but the minister's description is omitted.
  • Connection 2/3: 'and' preserves sequence but flattens the participial relation; the omission also weakens the link.
  • Idiom 2/2: the English is natural.
  • Accuracy 0/1: a described participant has been dropped. Total 7/10.
Principle

Mark what the target sentence preserves, not whether it copies Sanskrit syntax. Both scripts are intelligible; the differences are in completeness and compactness.

2. Rewrite the rubric so that it is fair to both Telugu and English and rewards accuracy over literalism.

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Revised rubric (10 marks)
  1. Content accuracy (4): all participants, actions and descriptive details are present; no invented detail.
  2. Clause relation (3): the relation between the absolutive action and the main action is preserved. Accept either a target-language participial construction or a correctly sequenced finite clause; penalise only loss or reversal of sequence.
  3. Target-language naturalness (2): the sentence reads as Telugu or English, not as Sanskrit word order.
  4. Names and technical terms (1): proper names, titles and key terms are rendered consistently.
Why change

The original row 'especially the ktvā link' secretly rewards Sanskrit syntax. A Telugu or English finite clause can preserve the same meaning. The revised row asks for the relation, not for a particular morpheme. This also makes the rubric defensible when scripts are moderated across media.

Note on literalism

Word-for-word rendering may keep all content but fail row 3. Free paraphrase may read well but fail row 1. The rows are independent, so the final mark reflects both.

3. Seven scripts left 'gatvā' untranslated. What whole-class feedback would address this without a full grammar revision?

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Feedback sequence (12 minutes)
  1. Put the Sanskrit clause on the board and ask students to find the main verb. Circle it.
  2. Ask what 'gatvā' adds: it names an action completed before the main action. Draw a simple two-step timeline.
  3. Show three target renderings: 'having gone, he asked'; 'he went and asked'; and a rendering that omits 'went'. Ask which loses information and why.
  4. Give a two-sentence mini-task: translate one new sentence with a ktvā and underline the word that carries the prior action.
Marking follow-up

For the seven scripts, do not re-mark the whole paper. Add a focused comment: 'The prior action is missing; add it with a participial phrase or a sequenced finite clause.' If the school allows, give a short recovery task rather than a full retest.

Why this is enough

The problem is not ignorance of all grammar; it is a habit of skipping indeclinables. The timeline and the contrast make the function visible without reopening the whole conjugation syllabus.