The Refrain Question: Enthusiasm, Devices, and a Suspected Guidebook
The poetry unit includes a prescribed lyric with a repeated refrain addressed to a mother. The 8-mark question asks students to 'appreciate how the refrain and imagery create feeling'. The rubric gives 3 marks for interpretation, 3 for identification and effect of poetic devices, and 2 for expression. One student, Latha, writes 180 words calling the poem 'very beautiful' four times, quotes the refrain once, and says it 'touches the heart'. Another student, Sohail, submits a 90-word answer that exactly matches a commercial guidebook's phrase 'the refrain is a refrain of filial devotion' and lists three devices without linking them to feeling. The teacher suspects copying but has no proof. The department wants marks entered today; a re-test is possible next week but would delay the report card.
1. Mark both answers out of 8 using the rubric. Show the component split and explain how you handle suspected copying without proof.
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Latha: 5/8. Interpretation 2/3: she identifies an emotional response but does not explain how the refrain produces it; 'beautiful' and 'touches the heart' are reactions, not readings. Devices 1/3: she quotes the refrain once but does not name a device or state its effect. Expression 2/2: coherent and controlled, even if repetitive.
Sohail: 4/8. Interpretation 1/3: the guidebook phrase is an assertion he does not unpack. Devices 2/3: three devices are named, but the rubric requires identification and effect; naming without effect cannot earn the third mark. Expression 1/2: the phrasing is not his own register and the answer is underdeveloped for 8 marks.
Copying: Do not deduct marks for plagiarism without proof, because the penalty is serious and the evidence is circumstantial. Mark against the rubric, record the concern, and use the oral verification below. If the viva shows he cannot explain the devices, offer the re-test rather than silently changing the score.
2. Design a 10-minute oral verification for Sohail that is fair and does not accuse him.
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Framing to the student: 'I want to check how you'd explain this orally, because the exam will ask you to link devices to feeling. This isn't about copying; it's about whether the explanation is yours.'
Three questions, escalating:
- 'Choose one device from your list. Read the line where it appears and tell me what feeling it creates in that line.' This tests link, not recall.
- 'If you had two more lines, what would you add to show the refrain changing tone?' This tests ownership and structure.
- 'Another student says the refrain is comforting; what would you say?' This tests ability to use the poem against a counterclaim.
Recording: Note whether he can quote accurately, name the device, and state an effect. If he can do all three orally but not in writing, the issue is expression, not honesty; award marks for the written answer and give a writing-support plan. If he cannot explain any device, offer the re-test and inform the department without accusing him.
3. Give Latha one revision instruction that would move her from 5 to 7 without writing the answer for her.
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Instruction: 'Every time you write "beautiful", replace it with a three-part sentence: claim + device + effect. Use this frame: "The poet makes me feel ___ by using ___ in the line ___, which suggests ___." Keep your personal reaction, but attach it to a word or sound in the poem.'
Why this works: Her expression is already 2/2, so she does not need a general instruction to 'analyse more'. She needs a syntactic scaffold that forces the missing operation. Replacing four evaluative adjectives with three framed sentences would plausibly raise interpretation from 2 to 3 and devices from 1 to 2, giving 7/8. The instruction does not supply the poem's meaning; it supplies the sentence shape into which she must put her own reading.