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Kagawa Entrance English: Sentence Structure and Written Expression: Building Clear Sentences

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Sentence Structure and Written Expression: Building Clear Sentences

What is tested

Sentence Structure and Written Expression tests whether you can build grammatical, logical, and correctly punctuated sentences: clause combining, parallel structure, modifier placement, and sentence ordering. The exam often gives scrambled parts or an underlined error.

Core rules

  • Every sentence needs a finite main clause; subordinate clauses need a connector such as 'because', 'although', or 'which'.
  • Keep parallel items in the same grammatical form: 'reading, writing, and speaking', not 'reading, writing, and to speak'.
  • Place modifiers next to what they modify. 'Only she called him' differs from 'She only called him'.
  • Join two independent clauses with a conjunction or a semicolon, not a comma alone.
  • In ordering tasks, find the topic first, then the connector that depends on it.

Worked example

Reorder: the proposal / because / was rejected / it / funding / lacked Answer: 'The proposal was rejected because it lacked funding.' Reasoning: 'The proposal' is the topic and subject of 'was rejected'. 'Because' introduces a subordinate clause; its subject 'it' refers to the proposal, and 'lacked' needs the object 'funding'. Placing 'because' first would create a fragment unless a main clause follows.

Traps

  • Comma splices: 'The plan failed, it lacked support.'
  • Dangling participles: 'Walking home, the rain started' implies the rain walked.
  • Faulty parallelism after 'and', 'or', 'not only ... but also'.
  • Misplaced 'only', 'almost', or 'even', which changes emphasis.